My Narrative on Fireworks By Yvette

A perfect night for fireworks

It was a horrible morning. Emily woke up by the most extraordinary noise. She could hear banging on the top of the roof. Emily had a deck outside her bedroom so she decided to go outside on her deck to check out the noise. She opened her curtains and saw it was just raining hail. Emily lived in a 15 story high apartment with her elder brother Josh. Her brother was only 18 so he was allowed to live on his own. Josh offered his sister to come and live with him in the apartment. Emily and Josh's parents were alcoholics, their parents knew that it would be best for their baby girl to go with their son. Emily was 5 years old. She loved reading, playing with her dolls and doing her homework. Josh on the other hand loved soccer, playing his x-box and taking care of his sister.

Emily went to ferman primary school. Ferman primary school was a girl school. It was the best school in the city and the closest to where Emily and Josh lived. The students at Emily’s school were told to leave school for a week due to leakages and lack of inspections. Josh chose to take 1 week off school until Emily’s school reopened. Emily is very frightened of staying at home by herself. Her brother was Emily’s guardian so he had to stay at home with her. Emily loved her family. Emily didn’t have any friends at all, She was a quiet and lonely little girl. It was still a rainy afternoon, Emily was playing with her dolls in front of the tv. She was trying to reenact the Little Mermaid.

Josh was in the kitchen making lunch for Emily. Emily felt like she was coming down with a headache so she decided to go open a window. Emily walked over to the window and opened it, she could feel the cold breeze blowing in her face. She looked down and saw a gigantic banner saying bad boy fireworks. Emily then ran to the calendar and saw it was Guy Fawkes today. Emily asked her brother if he could buy fireworks for them because it was Guy Fawkes. Josh said he would of loved to do fireworks today but it is pouring with rain and Josh didn't think it will stop. Emily felt sad and unhappy. She loved fireworks.

The dark night came and Emily went to bed. She cried under her blanket. She wished she could see fireworks. Josh heard Emily crying. He walked over to Emily’s bedroom to see if she was ok. Josh knew how much she wanted to see fireworks but he said that it was too late in the night to buy some. Emily then heard a bang, and then another bang. She stood up and walked to her terrace. She saw huge fireworks going off at the sky tower. She loved the sight. It was so beautiful. Josh asked Emily if she wanted to go see the fireworks up close. Emily told Josh she didn't need to see the fireworks up close, she could see the fireworks perfectly. It was the perfect night to hold fireworks because there was no rain and no hail. The sky was pitch black.

Emily woke up happy and glad that she had the chance to see  the most marvelous fireworks in the world.

This is my narrative Miss Eeles asked me write. We needed to find a picture from the kiwi kids news articles and write a narrative on it. This is my narrative I wrote on the picture of fireworks.