Why is facebook a problem?
Do you know what Facebook is? Facebook is one of the most popular social networking sites in the world. But over the years, Facebook has been turning into the worlds biggest black hole.
For starters, many kids are under the age limit to be using Facebook, yet they still do. This is illegal! These under age children are not aware of what could happen to them. This leads children to get involved in sticky situations.
Facebook affects the minds of children. Facebook is addictive! Children all over the world go on Facebook more than 3 times a day for an hour or more. This causes a massive drop in grades!
Some kids have more than 500 friends. That is okay, unless these friends are people you do not know. Kids get in dangerous situations when they socialize with anonymous people. Some kids don’t understand the dangers out in the world! Children can be given fake information by their anonymous friend like their age and name.
As kids, we need to be careful of who we socialize with. There are a lot of dangers socializing with random people, we need to start realizing the situations that could happen and think more carefully of how we can resolve this. It is true to say, Facebook is ruining minds.
2 comments:
Hi Yvette,
I really like your explanation. At the beginning of your introduction you started with a rhetorical question, which in my books really hooked me in. I also like how you added why kids are breaking the law for going on Facebook 3 times a day. That definitely hooked me into this explanation. And the other thing you added was when how kids can have 500 friends on facebook but Some of them can be people you don't know. This has have to be one of the best explanation I have seen so far. Keep up the good work and stay positive like you always do
Yours Sincerely,
Tim
Great work on this explanation Yvette. I really like how you said that it can lead to a massive drop in grades. This is really effective.
Keep up The Great Work
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