- Yvette said...
- Hi Thomas,
I like how you used complex and interesting words that bring the story to life. Remember to put a space after you do a full stop and also remember to do capitals for names.
Keep up the great work.
From Yvette
This is my comment to Thomas on his Little Red Riding Hood narrative
Monday 11 March 2013
My Comment To Thomas
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