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Monday, 11 March 2013

My Comment To Thomas


Yvette said...
Hi Thomas,

I like how you used complex and interesting words that bring the story to life. Remember to put a space after you do a full stop and also remember to do capitals for names.
Keep up the great work.

From Yvette

This is my comment to Thomas on his Little Red Riding Hood narrative



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