Title - Thea Stilton and the cherry blossom adventure
Author - Geronimo Stilton
Genre - Adventure
My ending
Kumi and Sakura took Thea in as an honored guest and helped her learn the dance, even Holger danced in the parade. Mr Nakamura watched from afar, proud of his daughter's talent. After the parade had had finished, Mr Nakamura thanked the Thea Sisters and presented them with a gift. It was a traditional kimono. Pam, Paulina, Nicky, Collete and Violet all got their own kimono. The Thea Sisters were overwhelmed by the kimono's beauty. The Thea Sisters had thanked Mr Nakamura and said goodbye to Sakura and Holger. At 8:00pm the Thea Sisters flight took off. The best friends waved through the small airplane window and smiled.
I like my ending better because in the book the Thea Sisters did not get a reward for their courage and braveness. After all, they did save Mr Nakamura's life.
< Kimono
1 comment:
I like the way you have changed the ending. I think they needed a thank you too, especially if they saved his life.
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